post 8

In the recent essay we just wrote the close reading epigraphs i would give it a medium. I feel that I had a basic argument but i could possible go deeper into the argument and maybe articulate it in a less repetative way. I also think my essay could be more organized. I want to analyze the epigraphs deeper as well by picking out specific words and phrases more. Now realizing how much I can adjust I may just give myself a low grading lol.