Thursday, March 11, 2010
post 8
In the recent essay we just wrote the close reading epigraphs i would give it a medium. I feel that I had a basic argument but i could possible go deeper into the argument and maybe articulate it in a less repetative way. I also think my essay could be more organized. I want to analyze the epigraphs deeper as well by picking out specific words and phrases more. Now realizing how much I can adjust I may just give myself a low grading lol.
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Ya know, I haven't read it but probably keep it at a medium. Gut reactions often turn out to be the right decision and really the stuff you want to improve can be done to any paper. It is really hard to distinguish between what is repetitive and what is backing up your facts. On one hand you don't want to beat a dead horse but on the other if you have more facts data and reasoning it really should be said. The only way to figure it out is have other people read the paper and tell you what they think.
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